The person that I look up to and has had a great impact in my life is my older sister Latise. She has made who I am today. I believe that without her I would have done somethings that I shouldn't even be thinking about doing. I know that some times she may get on my nerves and make me made through it all at the end of the day she is the one that I look up to.
For instance at one point I would always talk back to adults, not like in a smart way but just go word for word hen all I had to do is shut up. Until one time she caught me about to say something and she cut me off. She took me in the room and said if you don't say anything she will just talk and sooner or later she will just be talk to herself. To me she made a good point cause my grand mom would just talk and talk and talk until it was time to go to bead. Furthermore she has just taught be to be a better person.
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