Family

When I think of the word family I think of love. I believe that anything or anyone should come between family. I think that family should be unbreakable. For example my family is the type to stick together throw thick and thin. No matter what at the end of the day we are all we have. Furthermore when I was in the third grade I had this friend who would always be around me and that was my best friend. Well one time her and my sister had got in to an argue meant and I was just the middle man. Until my friend to make me choose. I then had to think about how was with me all my life and helped me throw a lot of things. Not only that but at the end of the day it would be me and my sister not me and my friend. So I told my so called friend "blood was thicker than water". On top of all that I always knew that family was and will always be first. I also believe that if you don't have family, what do you have. So in result I believe that family is first..........

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